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In 55 Words...

    • 48 posts
    December 1, 2017 3:33 AM PST

    As promised, here am I starting this thread for anyone that wishes to play along.

    If you're new around here and don't know what this is, allow me to explain. This is a place for writing short fiction, stories comprising of 55 words exactly (no more, no less). Title is not included, obviously. All stories must have a component of Female Dominance, Hypnosis and/or Mind Control but the themes within can be as varied as possible. Anything goes (including devotionals to your Domme) as long as the word limit is respected. 

    55-Word stories were first coined by brighter minds than mine but I've been its biggest supporter/creator within our niche for quite some time now. I first brought them to Inraptured in mid-2015 and since January 1st, 2016, I've been writing one every single day and it's likely I'll keep going so...

    Still, because I know there are plenty of other creative minds around here, I hereby give you a chance to express it and have some fun. Below are some examples of pieces I've written in the past.

     

    The first one was written for the Princess Sapphire Rain.

     

    The Blue


    Is it raining?

    Is the rain purple like the song of yore?

    Is it red, sacrificial blood at the altar of the world?

    Perhaps, it's black, oily tears from a forgotten god...

    No. It's blue, sapphire cascade washing away all thoughts.

    And when the past dries, and memories flake and fall, She'll have what's Hers.

     

    The piece below is a fetish take on a pivotal scene of The Lord of the Rings - The Fellowship of the Ring.

     

    The Fellowship of Slaves


    "Take it," Frodo begged.

    "If I do," Galadriel hummed, "a Queen shall rise! Beautiful and terrible as the dawn! Treacherous as the sea, drowning your thoughts! You'll love me, and despair!"

    "Yes, please!" He replied, exceedingly aroused.

    "Okay."

    That night, new rings were given to the remaining members of the Fellowship. Guess where they went.

     

    The piece below is a slice of hypnotic retribution.

     

    Better


    "... and that's why men are better than women at everything!" Professor Higgins concluded.

    "Mind if I challenge that?" A blue-clad lady asked him after the lecture, eyes glimmering.

    He laughed, unashamedly.

    An hour later...

    "Please, Goddess, may I kiss your ass?"

    "No, but you were partly right. You're better at begging than I'll ever be."

     

    I could go on but I'm sure you get the gist of it by now so why don't you add your ideas to the mix? Let's celebrate the fetish via literature and have some fun, shall we? Expect my short story of the day to appear sometime later. Until then... have at it, Inraptured community! cool

    • 48 posts
    December 1, 2017 8:40 AM PST

    Day 335/2017. A humorous piece on hypnotic chastity. Owen might not like it though.

     

    Release Date

    "Only 31 days left... " Owen muttered.
    "What's that?" Nate queried.
    "My Hypnodomme said she would release me from chastity at year's end."
    "Sounds good."
    "It's wonderful. 2025 can't come soon enough."
    "Wait, you're only getting released on 2025?"
    "Something wrong?"
    "No. I know what I'm getting you for Christmas now..."
    The answer was a calendar.

    • 48 posts
    December 2, 2017 7:14 AM PST

    Day 336/2017. A ghost story. Some things are impossible to resist even beyond the grave.

     

    Her Spirit

    "I love my new house..." Stanley commented.
    "New? You've been here for 13 years!" Paul sniggered.
    "True, but she hasn't..."
    "She?"
    "Look behind you."
    "Holy... that's a ghost!"
    "Indeed."
    "How come you're not afraid?"
    "She used to be a Femdom hypnotist."
    And as the saying goes: when the spirit is willing... the cock is weak.

    • 1 posts
    December 2, 2017 3:57 PM PST

    I don't have the skill of the master of this genre, but here goes.

     

    Discovering the Queen of Dreams

    Imagining, wandering...

    Searching, finding.

    Interesting, different -- unexpected! Ethical, unexploitative, safe. Enticing, alluring, pushing my buttons. Surely not real?

    Composing carefully, overthinking: redrafting. Emailing. Insecure. Compulsively checking for a reply.

    Reassuring. Taking a deep breath... booking!

    Thinking, preparing. Unsure, sleepless.

    Counting down hours; excited; anticipating; distracted.

    Skype calling. Nervous, heart racing, hands shaking.

    Chatting.

    Eyes closing...

    • 48 posts
    December 2, 2017 4:13 PM PST

    First of all, welcome to the "fray" and don't be a stranger in the days to come.

    Secondly, I'm no master, just a little bit more used to it all because I've been doing these for quite some time now.

    Thirdly, you're more than skilled as evidenced by the journey you so evocatively described.

    And finally, very nice, and thank you for playing. smile

    • 48 posts
    December 3, 2017 3:56 AM PST

    Day 337/2017. It's very cold around here.

     

    Snow Day

    "Yes or no, Carla?" Dean begged.
    "Snow!" She shouted.
    "Yeah, it's snowing but what does that have to do with me asking you to hypno...?"
    "Shhh..." she interrupted him. "It's so relaxing to watch the snowflakes fall... Wouldn't it be nice if you could just follow one all the way down?"
    Yes, it certainly would.

    • 7 posts
    December 4, 2017 12:39 AM PST

    Yay, the forum's topic is back, so we don't get spanked polluting the main site's time line ( :-) I'm kidding, I really do believe it's better placed here in the forum than on the main site, and spanking's good any way!!).

    To celebrate, a wtf piece ;-)

    Have a good one!

    Radiance

    Eyes, her eyes, so close

    Eyes, my eyes, shut closed.

    I was, here, lying,

    But wasn't She speaking?

     

    I know there's a Voice,

    But I can't seem to remember,

    I don't have a choice,

    My mind's now in winter.

     

    Radiating, pulsing,

    My memory goes.

    One moment it's roaring

    For a second, then it grows

    Flat.


    This post was edited by L2A Writes at December 4, 2017 12:40 AM PST
    • 48 posts
    December 4, 2017 7:55 AM PST

    That's a nice piece and I'm glad you decided to come back to play.

    Having a forum thread is good because it centralizes everyone's efforts but there's really nothing wrong with sharing Femdom Hypnosis literature on the "wall" because it doesn't deviate from the theme of the site at all. 

    Anyway, here's mine.

    Day 338/2017. A piece about thoughts.

     

    Deep Thoughts

    The pendulum swung back and forth.
    "What are you thinking now?" She asked.
    "That I shouldn't be thinking," he replied.
    "I like the way you don't think."
    "I like the way you make me think I don't."
    "What are you thinking now?"
    "Wanting you, needing you, pleasing you..."
    "Think deeper."
    The pendulum kept on swinging...

    • 7 posts
    December 5, 2017 12:48 AM PST

    Like this one too :-)

    Will try to post again here this week!

    • 48 posts
    December 5, 2017 7:19 AM PST

    I'll post one every day until the end of the year at least to conclude the challenge. That being said, here comes today's (dirty) entry. 

    Day 339/2017. I don't want what he's eating, okay?

     

    He Wants Candy?

    "This candy tastes funny," Sam noted, lips smeared with white.
    "Interesting..." Claire remarked.
    "Where did you get this, anyway?"
    "You gave it to me, remember? The box at least. I supplied the chocolate and you... the filling."
    "Oh..." he said, disgusted, but it was already too late.
    She snapped her fingers and ordered a refill.

    • 7 posts
    December 5, 2017 8:33 AM PST

    You're a genius :-)

     

    An attempt based on the coughing noises in my office's corridor

     

    More than a flu

    "You still seeing this hypnotherapist?"

    "Sure, once a week"

    "She good?"

    "Great! I'm more productive at work, I want to please Her, you know."

    "Interesting…"

    "There's just this thing, each time after a session, my testicles feel so swollen…"

    "Weird! Did you tell Her?"

    "She says my case requires more drastic action than a flu".

    • 48 posts
    December 5, 2017 9:52 AM PST

    I appreciate the compliment but that's not true at all. Another fine entry but I'm glad I don't have the flu.

  • December 5, 2017 1:42 PM PST


    QUANDRIES


    What has happened to me?
    How did all this come to pass?
    Where the hell am I?


    Does he know the truth?
    Why was he so easy to captivate?
    What will I do next?


    When did She become magnifical?
    I wonder if She realizes Her potential?
    Could She ever accept someone like me?


    Ensorcelling enigmas.

     

    • 48 posts
    December 5, 2017 3:19 PM PST

    Quite the poetic piece there. I like it. Thank you for adding to the thread and I hope you'll do so again in the future.

    • 7 posts
    December 6, 2017 12:49 AM PST
    S. B. said:

    I appreciate the compliment but that's not true at all. Another fine entry but I'm glad I don't have the flu.

     

    Well it is in fact. This daily task thingy is genius :-)

    • 7 posts
    December 6, 2017 1:05 AM PST

    Champion

    Surviving battles, duels and fights,

    Blood-filled days, sleepless nights.

    Mighty as lion,

    Defeating battalions,

    Appearing, his armour

    Plunges enemies in torpor.

     

    But power, strength,

    His glory, immense,

    He happily lays at the Feet

    Of a Lady, who, when they meet,

    Gets from him what he usually refuses,

    While to it always forcing his foes,

    Surrender.

    • 48 posts
    December 6, 2017 8:32 AM PST

    The poetic streak continues, I see. Very enjoyable as well. Time for mine.

    Day 340/2017. A humorous piece about identity that may or may not have been inspired by a friend of mine that confuses names all the time.

     

    What's In... A Couple of Names?

    "I agree completely, Jackie."
    "Jane."
    "Of course. Forgive me, Janice."
    "Jane! Geez, Paul... those hypnosis sessions must be really doing a number on you if you keep mixing up names like that."
    "Perhaps, but I never forget her name. Nor mine."
    "Really?"
    "Yes. Her name is Mistress and my name is Slave, Jules."
    Jane sighed.

  • December 6, 2017 8:51 AM PST


    BACKUP


    "Book her."
    "Dickless sonovabastard's bitch, You should've been love-struck too!" she screeched.
    "Tell your shrink or mouthpiece.


    ...


    "Our plan worked.  Your hypno-training me to act mesmerized while being conscious did it.  Got more than enough to convict that wannabe.  You're the best backup."

    "Next item."
    "Yes, Mistress Theanakimono."
    "It's reward timelessness.  Yield to Me." 

     

     

     

    • 48 posts
    December 6, 2017 9:58 AM PST

    Well, that one is certainly different.

    • 48 posts
    December 7, 2017 7:36 AM PST

    Day 341/2017. Something simple for The Holiday Season.

     

    Christmas Wish

    "What are you doing, Jeff?"
    "Writing a letter to Santa, Mike."
    "You're thirty-seven, dude!"
    "I know but can't I wish for something this Christmas?"
    "Of course you can, sorry. So what are you asking him?"
    "A hypnotic dominant woman to serve for all eternity."
    "That's..."
    "Too much?"
    "Just perfect. May I sign my name, too?"


    This post was edited by S. B. at December 7, 2017 8:00 AM PST
    • 36 posts
    December 7, 2017 7:46 AM PST
    dawwwww super cute, that last one.
    • 36 posts
    December 7, 2017 8:54 AM PST
    Alright, my turn to contribute. Hope you enjoy it.

    The Difference
    Can my good boy think?
    Or is he too blank~?
    I do wonder if he can tell
    The difference between the two
    Blanking, and thinking.
    Thinking to blanking
    Blanking to thinking
    Thinking about blanking
    Blanking about thinking
    Thinking blank
    Blank thinking
    Thinking is blanking
    Blanking is thinking
    Can you tell, dear?
    "Yesssss Mistress."
    "Good boy~"

    • 48 posts
    December 7, 2017 9:08 AM PST
    blissy mouse said:
    dawwwww super cute, that last one.

     

    Thanks, and yes, I like your contribution as well. Unlike others, "good boy" doesn't do anything for me but that doesn't subtract from the overall enjoyment of the tale. Thank you for adding to the thread.

    • 48 posts
    December 8, 2017 9:48 AM PST

    Day 342/2017. A humorous piece inspired by one of Count Cockula's remarks yesterday on the main feed.

     

    Need

    Brandon struggled against the chair's restraints.
    "Let me go, I need to write!"
    "Do you really?" Deirdre sniggered. "Wouldn't you rather be brainwashed for real instead of just writing about it? I can make you mindlessly obedient, wanting only what I want, craving only to please... what do you say?"
    "What's taking you so long?"

    • 8 posts
    December 8, 2017 10:24 AM PST

    Haha, good one S.B. Did you pull me here by magic? Forums is a good place, I know. Just wrote something else, it was 4800 words but I promise to add something here too. And the hypnotic holiday lyrics topic, that's funny because few years ago I did couple famous Xmas songs but they are pretty harsh.


    This post was edited by Count Cockula at December 8, 2017 10:25 AM PST