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  • December 9, 2017 4:10 AM PST
    Count Cockula said:

    Haha, good one S.B. Did you pull me here by magic? Forums is a good place, I know. Just wrote something else, it was 4800 words but I promise to add something here too. And the hypnotic holiday lyrics topic, that's funny because few years ago I did couple famous Xmas songs but they are pretty harsh.

     

    Thanks, and yes, it was definitely magic. Add what you wish when you wish to do so as the thread is not going anywhere (I think).

    It's time for today's piece.

    Day 343/2017. A bit of supernatural humor combined with recent events. Or vice versa. Pun at the end obviously intended.

     

    Grand Theft

    "Have you heard about the latest bitcoin theft? More than $70 million gone overnight!" Alec commented.
    "Bah. Stealing souls is much more fun. More than 100 million already and counting..." Cassandra smiled, evilly.
    "What's that supposed to mean?"
    Her eyes glistened in unison with her sharp canines.
    Crypt currency really is something to die for.

  • December 10, 2017 10:08 AM PST

    Thnking What was Thought

     

    “What do you mean, exactly?” I asked her.

    “What did you think I meant?”

    “I… uh… didn’t think...”

    “Good boy.” She spoke those two words of praise before I could say that I hadn’t thought I should say what I thought she had meant and then I found I didn’t need to think at all.

  • December 10, 2017 11:12 AM PST

    That was very nice. Thank you, Fate's Fool.

    My piece for today is a bit of political satire.

    Day 344/2017. Alexandra Ryder strikes again.

     

    Saturday Night Trance

    "Alexandra?"
    "Yes, General?"
    "About yesterday..."
    "What about it?"
    "You hypnotized the President into becoming a Karaoke singer! And couldn't you have picked a better song than You're The One That I Want?"
    "As greasy as he is... no. Don't tell me you wanted to be Travolta."
    "No, but I didn't want his bedroom keys either."

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    December 10, 2017 12:04 PM PST

    Day 1. I thought I call this Lilith...or

    ONE HELLA VAMPIRELLA

    Dimorphic in disguise,
    looking holy chaste.
    Behind those green big eyes
    chuckling pokerfaced.

    Daytime Cinderella
    transmutes at sunset.
    One hella Vampirella,
    emerges in a black corset.

    Luscious lightbringer,
    flutters her eyelashes.
    Second self witch finger
    ignites embers in the ashes.

    Victim shivers weakened,
    in succubus embrace.
    Red rivers of desire flow
    until the morning rays.

     

     

  • December 10, 2017 11:02 PM PST
    1.  


      In Vibrato Veritas


      "Anything you can do, I can do better" he thundered.

      "Focus upon Me" She suggested.


      ...


      "I can do anything better than you" he sang.

      "In My eyes lose your selfishness" She instructed.


      ...


      "Yes I can" came his whisper.

      "Obey! Me" She commanded.
                                                                                                                                                
      ...


      "Anything i can do You can do better" he thundered.

       

       

  • December 11, 2017 11:31 AM PST

    Nice entries, Count Cockula and Jarod Whitestaff. One Hella Vampirella is quite fun. The same can be said about In Vibrato Veritas although this one sounds familiar somehow. 

    Day 345/2017. A dirty piece about memories.

     

    Recollection

    "I finally remember everything from our hypnosis sessions, Greta!"
    "Everything, Joe?"
    "Yes."
    "Do you remember when I made you wear dirty diapers?"
    "Yes."
    "Do you remember doing my laundry completely naked?"
    "Yes."
    "Do you remember when you licked my boots in front of your boss for two hours straight?"
    "No, because that didn't happen..."
    "... yet."

  • December 12, 2017 7:30 AM PST

    Day 346/2017. A simple piece concerning repetition, conditioning, brainwashing, and acceptance.

     

    Nothing Wrong

    "There is nothing wrong with me," he said.
    "There is nothing wrong with me," he repeated.
    "There is nothing wrong with me!" He concluded.
    "Do you have something to tell me?" She asked
    "I am your mindless, hypnotized slave. There is nothing wrong with me," he responded.
    "Nothing at all," she smirked as he knelt.

  • December 13, 2017 9:07 AM PST

    Day 347/2017. A bit of erotic horror/humor inspired by Japanese folklore.

     

    Dessert

    "There's a hole in my heart," Brad said.
    "Because Juri gave you a sweet taste of hypnotic submission and now you want something real you can't have?" Alan asked.
    "That too but her cousin is also a Kijo and she's been feeding on me since we met."
    "Ouch!"
    "I'm glad you're here. She wants dessert."

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    December 14, 2017 1:20 AM PST

    A contribution in the hope of bringing you good vibes, whatever the obscure subgenre of alternative punk-grindcore you enjoy (or not ;-) )

     

    The Spinning and the Beat

    "So, as I was telling you, I then noticed that repetitive beats and spinning discs are deeply hypnotic things, right?"

    "Sure! Indeed surprising none of us ever thought of using those!"

    "Well, don't be so sure. Pet! You may enter the room now!

    "What?"

    "Are you ready to have your toes sucked by Michael Schwartz?"

     

    ps: also known as Mix Master Mike, Michael Scwhartz was mixing and spinning for the Beastie Boys. Good ol' days!!


    This post was edited by L2A Writes at December 14, 2017 1:20 AM PST
  • December 14, 2017 10:36 AM PST

    That's cute... and a bit scary as well. 

    Day 348/2017. A piece about stray thoughts becoming focused.

     

    Stream of Consciousness

    "Where are my car keys?"
    "Did I leave the stove on?"
    "I'm going to be late for work... again!"
    "The report sucks. She's going to hate it."
    "Another coffee stain?"
    "Stop... stop... STOP!"
    "Easy now... happy thoughts. Think about her... her eyes... her voice..."
    "Sleep would be nice... yes!"
    "Obey."
    "Obey her."
    "Obey her always."

  • December 15, 2017 4:29 AM PST

    Day 349/2017. Something silly because I went to see The Last Jedi yesterday.

     

    A Long Time Ago, In a Galaxy Far Far Away...

    Star Wars Episode LXIX - Rinse and Repeat

    We continue to try to milk the franchise. There's a new Empire, a new Resistance, danger everywhere... the usual stuff. At least the bad guy is a bad girl now and uses the Dark Side of the Force to condition everyone into believing this is worth watching. Enjoy!

  • December 15, 2017 7:40 AM PST

     


    IT


    "It won't affect me."
    Hypno-Glamour-Goddess's disappointment for him was clear.


    ...


    He pondered It.


    ...


    “Why was Hypno-Glamour-Goddess disappointed for me?”  he contemplated It.



    I explored It.



    i fantasized about It.



    Over and again, he beseeched Hypno-Glamour-Goddess about It.



    Out of the blue, She used It.

    It worked like a charm.


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  • December 15, 2017 10:18 AM PST

    That's interesting though the shift in perspective in the middle feels a bit awkward to me. Thank you for continuing to add to this thread.

  • December 16, 2017 7:55 AM PST

    Day 350/2017. Something concerning bets with a little bit of humor added to the mix.

     

    She Wins

    "Yes!" Angela shouted, gleefully.
    "Why are you so happy?" Peter asked.
    "One hundred hypnoslaves in ten days... I win!"
    "Not quite."
    "Explain yourself."
    "Remember Jack? He's been pretending all along and since our bet expires in three minutes..."
    "I still win because I only need one to put you under."
    Fifty-five seconds to be precise.

  • December 17, 2017 3:22 AM PST

    Day 351/2017. Something inspired by a dream I had last night. The pun at the end is more than intended.

     

    Gladiator

    "Come at me," she goaded him. He charged, sword in hand.
    "Come to me," she whispered, eyes glowing. He faltered, lost his grip, began walking towards her.
    "Come with me," she suggested. He obediently followed.
    "Come for me," she commanded. He did. The crowd cheered.
    To the victor, the spoils. To the loser, the spill.

  • December 18, 2017 3:35 PM PST

    Day 352/2017. A simple piece about begging.

     

    Realization

    "What do you want?"
    "To submit to you."
    "Then why don't you?"
    "I'm afraid."
    "Of what?"
    "Of sucking big time, letting you down. I need to be trained by you."
    "Trained how?"
    "Reshape my mind, hypnotize me, please."
    "I already did."
    "When?"
    "When I made you beg for it. Again!"
    He begged all night long.

  • December 19, 2017 8:13 AM PST

    Day 353/2017. A piece about the ecstasy of being entranced.

     

    In Her Cage

    Locked.
    The cage lies before you, door wide open and yet you're... locked.
    Locked by the locks of her hair.
    Locked by the click of her heels on the floor.
    Locked by every subtle intonation of her voice.
    Locked in the most vivid of fantasies, unwilling to wake up.
    Perpetual obedience awaits... surrender your mind.

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    December 19, 2017 8:18 AM PST

    HOSPITAL LOBBY

    Fifty five seconds.
    Million mundane remarks.
    Stream of thousand thoughts
    of which, perhaps one sparks.

    Circle closes in a minute,
    smooth lassitude wins.
    Drags into the infinite
    before the meeting begins.

    Tick, tock, tick, tock,
    pain balloons to cataclysm.
    Goddess face in lobby clock,
    beats pants off priapism.

    "Buzzzzz!"
    "Queue number six zero!"


    This post was edited by Count Zero at December 19, 2017 8:20 AM PST
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    December 20, 2017 2:37 AM PST

    Loved your "Gladiator" piece, S.B., really cool!

    Poem by count cocku is also excellent!

     

    Thanks lads!

  • December 20, 2017 4:17 AM PST

    I thought the poem was cool too.

    Day 354/2017 (Only 11 days to go!). Exactly what the title says but some myths are real.

     

    A Lesson in Mythology

    Aphrodite. Greek Goddess of love, beauty, pleasure, and procreation.
    Izanami-no-Mikoto. Japanese Goddess of both creation and death.
    The Zorya Sisters. Slavic guardian Goddesses known as the Auroras. They represent the Morning Star and the Evening Star.
    Vesta. Roman Goddess of the hearth, home, and family.
    Her. All-Powerful Hypnotic Goddess of your mind.
    Sleep and worship.

  • December 21, 2017 5:12 AM PST

    Day 355/2017 (Only 10 days to go!). What do you say, Inraptured? Year 3 of this challenge in 2018? Until then, here's a bit of sci-fi humor.

     

    Archaeological Expedition

    "We're losing him," the doctor said.
    "Get that thing off of him then!" The Captain vociferated.
    "And risk the whole ship? It's too dangerous, I'm sorry."
    The crew member atop the crystalline table writhed in orgasmic pleasure, headphones glued to his head. The Voltraxians would never research Earth's history of Femdom Hypnosis MP3 ever again.

  • December 22, 2017 4:53 PM PST

    Day 356/2017. Reading is good for you.

     

    Invisible Mental Ink

    If you're reading this... it's too late for you. Yes, normally you wouldn't be able to as it was written with invisible mental ink. Only those who are completely entranced can see it. You believe me, don't you? Of course, you do. You always believe your Mistress. Read more, pet. Sink deeper. You're mine now.

  • December 23, 2017 3:34 AM PST

    Day 357/2017. This piece was inspired by the word "sleepwalking".

     

    Sleepdancer


    Jackson looked at the footage The evidence was undeniable.
    "That's me," he agreed. "but I don't remember doing that at all!"
    "How can you possibly not remember stripping in front of a police officer and offering her a private dance?" Detective Collins asked, doing his best 'bad cop' routine.
    "My girlfriend's a hypnotist," Jackson shrugged.

  • December 24, 2017 6:55 AM PST

    Day 358/2017. I'm not doing any shopping today.

     

    Last Minute Shopping

    "Fancy meeting you here, Joe," she whispered in his ear.
    "G-goddess?" He shivered as her enthralling voice awakened the submissive in him.
    "Who else? Doing some last minute shopping?"
    "Yes," he mumbled, wanting nothing more than to drop to his knees.
    "So am I but I forgot my purse..."
    Fortunately, he hadn't forgotten his wallet.

  • December 25, 2017 8:22 AM PST

    Day 359/2017. Something dirty.



    Merry XXX-mas

    "... and a Happy New Year," her melodic voice echoed all around.
    Alan hung up the phone, ecstatic. Receiving a message from his Hypnodomme on Christmas day was the best present ever and...
    Why was he humping the front door like a madman?
    Why were all the neighbors watching?
    Why didn't he care?
    Merry XXX-mas indeed!