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    • 44 posts
    January 26, 2018 8:13 AM PST

    Ooh, this last one "Lights Out" is great. Good job S.B.

  • January 26, 2018 9:39 AM PST

    Thanks. It was fun to write. They all are, really. 



    Day 26 - January 26th. A humorous piece about a "dirty" alien invasion.

    Secret Weapon

    "They're coming!" a soldier shouted.
    "I told you," Claire grinned.
    "And they can't stop."
    "Of course not."
    "They're sitting ducks out there! Attack!" General Murphy ordered.
    They were brutal. It was an onslaught. The crazy plan shouldn't have worked and yet it did, thanks to their secret weapon.
    Final Score: Hypnodomme - 1, Alien Invaders - 0.

  • January 27, 2018 4:49 AM PST

    Day 27 - January 27th. A piece inspired by Jackson Pollock's famous painting, No. 5, 1948. The title has a double meaning, obviously.

    No. 5, 2018

    "This is not art!" Dan smirked.
    "What is it then?" Stella queried.
    "Random brush strokes. I could do this with my eyes closed!"
    "They already are..." she cooed.
    He tried to open them, to no avail. Her voice painted spirals in his mind as he sank into surrender. Another fine addition to her ever-growing collection.

  • January 28, 2018 10:26 AM PST

    Day 28 - January 28th. A piece about a pop star's demands.


    Brian looked at the list of demands.
    "Mandarin coriander candles, twenty bottles of Cabernet Sauvignon, and a dozen hypnotized slaves who love anal sex? What?"
    The pop star gazed at his erection and chuckled.
    "Twelve may be a bit too much so I'll settle for one."
    Neither one left her dressing room for a week.

  • January 29, 2018 1:04 PM PST

    Day 29 - January 29th. A bit of self-referential challenge humor, complete with amnesia, different persona, and triggered response.

    Plot Twist

    "And when they finally met..." Lucas teased.
    "Let me guess: girl hypnotized and enslaved boy," Vanessa noted.
    "Actually, boy hypnotized girl."
    "So that girl would come to terms with the idea of hypnotizing and enslaving boy."
    "Shocking! Wouldn't work for us though."
    "We're both girls."
    Vanessa snapped her fingers and Lucy remembered everything.

  • January 30, 2018 10:52 AM PST

    Day 30 - January 30th. A story that deals with one of life's most pressing concerns wink in an unexpected, humorous way.

    Size Doesn't Matter

    "But it's so small."
    "How am I going to get endless pleasure from that, Joe?"
    "Let's try."
    "How about no?"
    Claire snatched the hypnotic script from his hands. It was small indeed. A single word.
    "Sleep!" She commanded.
    He closed his eyes. Submission woke up.
    And people say size matters...

  • January 31, 2018 10:58 AM PST

    Day 31 - January 31st. The first month of the 2018 challenge concludes with a corruption story you probably won't see in the Marvel Cinematic Universe anytime soon. Move over, Venom and Carnage. tongue-out


    "Who's there?" Peter Parker asked.
    "Just your friendly neighborhood blonde chick..."
    "Gwen? I'm so happy! I was sure the new Symbiote had gotten you."
    "It did," she retorted, covered in pink goo. "Did you know this one likes to telepathically control minds?"
    He didn't, but now he does. How goes the song again? Spider-Slave, Spider-Slave...

  • February 1, 2018 10:32 AM PST

    Let's begin the second month, shall we? 

    Day 32 - February 1st. Sometimes, the best way to "fix" someone is through enslavement.


    Alec threw himself at Mandy's feet.
    "I need to be enslaved!" He begged.
    "Yes. I need rules, goals. I need to have my will taken away in order to be whole."
    "Took you long enough..." She smirked, deepening the trance.
    He would be reminded of that constantly while forgetting to think on his own.

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  • February 2, 2018 11:15 AM PST

    Day 33 - February 2nd. A piece inspired by Looney Tunes, namely Bugs Bunny famous quip.

    Her Bunny

    "What's up, doc?" Lola grinned.
    "You're no Bugs, dear," Mel replied.
    "True, and bunny ears suit you better. Is that a carrot in your pocket or...?"
    "I'm always happy to see you," he said, lost in her entrancing eyes.
    "Good. Ready to go looney?"
    "Please, don't make me sing."
    "Don't worry."
    She preferred moaning, anyway.

  • February 3, 2018 10:21 AM PST

    Day 34 - February 3rd. This time, the humor and heat enter the digital arena of Mortal Kombat. I've always liked Sonya Blade.

    Hypnotik Kombat

    "Get over here," Sonya Blade laughed.
    "You stole my line," Scorpion grumbled.
    "That's not all she's going to steal..." Sub-Zero declared, thoughts frozen.
    "Save your fiery breath and surrender," she commanded, eyes glimmering.
    As Scorpion felt his will being replaced with submissive desires, his only thought was:
    "Why is this called a Fatality, again?"

  • February 4, 2018 10:53 AM PST

    Day 35 - February 4th. Here's a piece of History that never happened... maybe?

    Disney After Kink

    History says that on February 4th, 1938, Disney's Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs was first exhibited to the general public.
    What History doesn't say is that all men became as dwarfs, kneeling under the women's skirts during the presentation.
    "Mirror, mirror on the wall, who's the most entrancing of all?" the time-travelling hypnotist chuckled.

  • February 5, 2018 9:20 AM PST

    Day 36 - February 5th. A debacle between a succubus and a vampire because supernatural stuff is fun.

    Two for One

    The succubus tail-slapped the vampire.
    "I got here first."
    "I came for the blood. Can't we share?" The vampire replied.
    "Don't I get any saying in the matter?" asked the naked young man, afraid of his own arousal.
    "No," they said in unison, finally something they could agree on.
    They both feasted on his mind.

  • February 6, 2018 4:07 AM PST

    Day 37 - February 6th. This one features Alexandra Ryder and... Picasso?

    Magic Sentence

    "Yes, General?"
    "Why is our psychiatrist walking around the base looking like a Picasso?"
    "You know he's a painter in his spare time, don't you?"
    "Everybody knows that."
    "Well, he came to me yesterday, mumbling about wanting to make a glorious masterpiece. He even used the magic sentence."
    "Which is...?"
    "I'm open to suggestions."

  • February 7, 2018 3:27 AM PST

    Day 38 - February 7th. A piece inspired by the character of Dr. Evil in the old Austin Powers movies albeit with a fetish intonation, obviously.


    Dr. Vile adressed the world leaders via videoconference.
    "Gentlemen, either you pay me a trillion dollars or..."
    "Or what?" asked a choir of voices.
    "I use my H-Ray to turn you all into mindless sex slaves."
    Two minutes later, she got her response.
    "We're flying to you so you can make good on your threat."

  • February 8, 2018 9:18 AM PST

    Day 39 - February 8th. A piece about a very specific work of art. Notice the double meaning of the title and the innuendo present in some of the characters names. wink

    Comic Relief

    The museum guide was terribly excited.
    "In this panel, we see King Hardun meeting Queen Denilah."
    Everyone nodded.
    "In the second, we see the Queen seducing him, using a love potion."
    Everyone nodded.
    "And in the third, we see the King kneeling, begging to cum."
    Everyone laughed except Joe. Next to him, his Hypnodomme smirked.

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    February 8, 2018 12:06 PM PST

    hahaha, such a comical wordplay.

  • February 9, 2018 9:51 AM PST

    Pleased you think so. Anyway, let's move on...

    Day 40 - February 9th. This is one of the dirtiest pieces I've ever written and that's okay.

    Urine for a Treat

    Karen laid the drinks on the table. Beer, wine, Vodka...
    "Bottoms up," she instructed.
    Matthew's forehead veins twitched, her mental conditioning taking over.
    "I don't want to."
    "That's right, you don't. This is all you want, now."
    She filled a glass with warm Goddess nectar, making him drool.
    He never had a drinking problem again.


  • February 10, 2018 7:01 AM PST

    Day 41 - February 10th. Here's a piece of unapologetic fetish poop humor... and "missing" body parts.

    Fire in the Hole

    "Fire in the hole... again!" Jane chuckled.
    "This isn't funny," Alex protested. "Is farting on command the best way you have to demonstrate your hypnotic control over me?"
    "Shall I do what I did to my ex, instead?"
    He thought of Brad asking passersby if they had seen his cock anywhere and shuddered.
    "Never mind."

  • February 11, 2018 6:37 AM PST

    Day 42 - February 11th. A piece about a new painting by Leonardo da Vince and more time-travelling hypnotic tomfoolery. History is doomed to be kinky, I guess.

    Enigmatic Smile

    "How can this be?"
    "Good question."
    "A new Da Vinci doesn't just appear out of thin air, Jameson!"
    "And yet... These are definitely the Master's strokes, Morris."
    "It looks like the Mona Lisa, same enigmatic smile and... tell me that's a brush under her dress!"
    Invisible to the eye, the time-travelling hypnotist thought: "It's not."

  • February 12, 2018 6:10 AM PST

    Day 43 - February 12th. A piece about a very special anthology... and violet eyes.

    Call for Submissions

    The ad was straightforward: a chance to be a part of a new short stories anthology.
    Bill turned on his laptop, surfed to the site, filled out the corresponding form.
    The screen flickered, music dripped, violet eyes glimmered and the book's title came to life.
    "Hypnotized Boys Obey," he muttered, before hitting the "Submit" button.

  • February 13, 2018 7:58 AM PST

    Day 44 - February 13th. I go back to the digital world of Resident Evil 4 this time around, in a sequel to a piece I wrote back in September 26th, 2016.

    The original piece was this one.


    Resident Sexy 4

    “Geez, Ashley! Quiet down, please!”
    “Look at this Illuminados Pendant I found. Pretty, right?”
    “Very, but we have to keep moving. If that chainsaw guy finds us…”
    “He’s gone to bingo. Your head is safe. Your mind on the other hand…”
    “Look at the pendant, Leon. This game’s about to get even better… “


    This is the sequel written today, and it assumed Leon managed to escape Ashley's hypnotic clutches, but...


    Resident Sexy 4 Remistressed 

    Leon stopped to catch his breath.
    "What're ya buyin, stranger?" the merchant asked.
    "Do you have any Ashley Repellent on you?" Leon begged.
    "He doesn't, but I have some mind-warping pheromones..." a sultry voice said.
    "Call me 'Mistress', handsome."
    "Selling ya mind, I see," the merchant nodded, feeling dizzy. He could do that, too.

  • February 14, 2018 3:03 PM PST

    Day 45 - February 14th. A very dirty Valentine's Day piece.


    "I'm starving!" Jonathan screamed.
    "No 'food' for you today," Becca chuckled as she played with her pussy.
    "But it's Valentine's!"
    "You're not my boyfriend, you're my hypno-slave."
    "No butt for you either. Not mine at least."
    "Can I at least use my finger?"
    "On your butt? Go ahead."
    Chocolates would never taste the same.

  • February 15, 2018 9:32 AM PST

    Day 46 - February 15th. Oh look, Alexandra is a glutton...  Roll Eyes My country will never be the same.

    Sweet Tooth

    "Yes, General?"
    "How's Portugal?"
    "Cold, but their pastries keep me warm. They're delicious!"
    "Should I expect an astronomical list of expenses on account of desserts?"
    "No. Don't forget I have my ways of getting what I want."
    "So you're hypnotizing people in exchange for a free sweet?"
    "Absolutely not!"
    "A dozen, at least."

  • February 16, 2018 9:36 AM PST

    Day 47 - February 16th. A piece about learning to enjoy Opera whether one wants it or not.

    Fat Lady

    Eleanor's landlord banged at her door.
    "Stop that racket!"
    She opened it, grinning.
    "Not until the fat lady sings".
    He peeked inside, saw six men in women's clothes, murdering Opera.
    "I don't see any lady in there..." he said.
    She showed him her pendant and a sparkly Valkyrie outfit.
    "Yeah... I was waiting for you."

  • February 17, 2018 8:43 AM PST

    Day 48 - February 17th. A piece about changes.

    Change of Career

    "So you want a change of career?" Kathy asked.
    "Correct," Vincent nodded.
    "A job where you don't have to think much, if at all?"
    "And preferably with a woman boss?"
    "Indeed. Do you have anything like that?"
    She gave him an mp3 player, a pair of headphones, and a contract. It read "My hypno-slave."