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Limerick Challengeq

  • February 16, 2018 5:35 AM PST

    As suggested by SB.


    There once was a woman named Kate,

    Whose body was objectively great,

    Her orange tank top,

    Made my heart stop,

    And now she inherits my estate!

    • 42 posts
    February 16, 2018 9:11 AM PST

    I obey, wicked powerful woman.
    She caught my soul in her talisman.
    When she taps it lightly,
    I awaken sprightly.
    To please, put into practice her plan.

    • 25 posts
    April 22, 2018 7:21 AM PDT

    One Mesmeric Dance

    A woman with a hypnotic stare
    Said “Come dance if you dare”
    I had two left feet
    And one hip obsolete
    But my mind didn’t care.

    Such was her might
    That it felt just right
    To dance all night long
    In a silly little thong
    That used to be white.

    And you know what, I say,
    It is good to obey
    And to take a chance
    At one mesmeric dance,
    The perfect use of a day.

  • April 24, 2018 11:29 AM PDT




    A noted 'Grande Dame' of surpassing loveliness and skill.
    Was indeed expert at sculpting all to Her iron will.
    She was well known and much praised for certain charms.
    With these prime lures did She dazzle and disarm.
    So, She wisely crafted and refined these entrancing thrills.

    Said a man to Her, "All call me High King von MacTavish.
    Since birth I've gotten anything that was my merest wish.
    I have heard many praise your allurements magnificence.
    All this falderal is to my mind of no consequence.
    The only article of importance is my fetish.”

    Considering how he had approached Her.
    Part of Her said, "Don't grant him one hour."
    But She knew this fop could not perceive,
     She held one superb trick up Her sleeve.
    And it is the greatest hypno-power.

    Said this HypnoDomme most sage and sexy.
    "To Me this great truth is quite plain to see.
    How I shall you enthrall.
    Does not matter at all.
    The point is, you'll obey, serve, and love Me."

    • 25 posts
    April 25, 2018 2:34 AM PDT

    That was quite nice. Thank you for sharing.

    • 1 posts
    July 19, 2018 12:17 PM PDT

    There was a young man

    From Cork who confused haiku

    With a limerick

    This post was edited by Caudex Sortis at July 25, 2018 4:40 AM PDT
  • July 25, 2018 3:48 AM PDT

    Some fellow of great confidence oft bragged and boasted, "To all women this is what I say,
    No matter what any of you doth dare to say or do, I shall not fall under your sway."
    A sage HypnoDominatrix did muse, with a knowing smile and wink,
    "Your heart is set in stone, and your mind is made up about what you think.
    Ah! but  with My wiles and will, and covert spells, I've cast upon you I have and get My way."

    • 1 posts
    September 18, 2018 12:36 PM PDT

    There was a strict woman from France
    Who asked if I wanted to dance
    My underwear was tented
    And so I relented
    Then proceeded to enter a trance

    • 30 posts
    September 18, 2018 8:15 PM PDT

    Forgot about this thread. Nice work from everyone.