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  • February 16, 2018 5:35 AM PST

    As suggested by SB.

     

    There once was a woman named Kate,

    Whose body was objectively great,

    Her orange tank top,

    Made my heart stop,

    And now she inherits my estate!

    • 44 posts
    February 16, 2018 9:11 AM PST

    I obey, wicked powerful woman.
    She caught my soul in her talisman.
    When she taps it lightly,
    I awaken sprightly.
    To please, put into practice her plan.

  • April 22, 2018 7:21 AM PDT

    One Mesmeric Dance

    A woman with a hypnotic stare
    Said “Come dance if you dare”
    I had two left feet
    And one hip obsolete
    But my mind didn’t care.

    Such was her might
    That it felt just right
    To dance all night long
    In a silly little thong
    That used to be white.

    And you know what, I say,
    It is good to obey
    And to take a chance
    At one mesmeric dance,
    The perfect use of a day.

    • 18 posts
    April 24, 2018 11:29 AM PDT

    THE ULTIMATE HYPNO-SPELL

     

     

    A noted 'Grande Dame' of surpassing loveliness and skill.
    Was indeed expert at sculpting all to Her iron will.
    She was well known and much praised for certain charms.
    With these prime lures did She dazzle and disarm.
    So, She wisely crafted and refined these entrancing thrills.


    Said a man to Her, "All call me High King von MacTavish.
    Since birth I've gotten anything that was my merest wish.
    I have heard many praise your allurements magnificence.
    All this falderal is to my mind of no consequence.
    The only article of importance is my fetish.”


    Considering how he had approached Her.
    Part of Her said, "Don't grant him one hour."
    But She knew this fop could not perceive,
     She held one superb trick up Her sleeve.
    And it is the greatest hypno-power.


    Said this HypnoDomme most sage and sexy.
    "To Me this great truth is quite plain to see.
    How I shall you enthrall.
    Does not matter at all.
    The point is, you'll obey, serve, and love Me."

  • April 25, 2018 2:34 AM PDT

    That was quite nice. Thank you for sharing.

    • 1 posts
    July 19, 2018 12:17 PM PDT

    There was a young man

    From Cork who confused haiku

    With a limerick


    This post was edited by Caudex Sortis at July 25, 2018 4:40 AM PDT
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    July 25, 2018 3:48 AM PDT

    Some fellow of great confidence oft bragged and boasted, "To all women this is what I say,
    No matter what any of you doth dare to say or do, I shall not fall under your sway."
    A sage HypnoDominatrix did muse, with a knowing smile and wink,
    "Your heart is set in stone, and your mind is made up about what you think.
    Ah! but  with My wiles and will, and covert spells, I've cast upon you I have and get My way."

    • 1 posts
    September 18, 2018 12:36 PM PDT

    There was a strict woman from France
    Who asked if I wanted to dance
    My underwear was tented
    And so I relented
    Then proceeded to enter a trance

    • 86 posts
    September 18, 2018 8:15 PM PDT

    Forgot about this thread. Nice work from everyone.

  • September 15, 2020 1:28 PM PDT

    A hypnotist lady from Derry,
    decided to pop her lad's hypno-cherry,
    with a pendulum swing,
    and a sparkling ring,
    he now is her slave and quite merry!

    • 86 posts
    September 15, 2020 7:20 PM PDT
    hypnosis enthusiast said:

    A hypnotist lady from Derry,
    decided to pop her lad's hypno-cherry,
    with a pendulum swing,
    and a sparkling ring,
    he now is her slave and quite merry!

    Nice one

    • 18 posts
    September 16, 2020 5:15 PM PDT


    A luxurious HypnoDomme of grand beauty, brains, and zest.
    Met a wealthy genius who sought only for the very best.
    With Her treasure troves of tantalizing, top-drawer tricks.
    This fine gentleman She so skillfully did quite transfix.
    In Her pleasures multiverse, he's evermore Her generous guest.

     

    • 86 posts
    September 16, 2020 6:58 PM PDT

    "Why is Fall your favorite season," his unmindful question.

    "You mean your favorite," the hypnotist enjoyed his mind's cession.

    Quicker than his hurried, topical pivoting,

    The answer she uttered was absolutely riveting.

    Her smile went wide, hearing his mindless Fall confession.

     

    • 86 posts
    September 16, 2020 6:59 PM PDT
    jarod whitestaff said:


    A luxurious HypnoDomme of grand beauty, brains, and zest.
    Met a wealthy genius who sought only for the very best.
    With Her treasure troves of tantalizing, top-drawer tricks.
    This fine gentleman She so skillfully did quite transfix.
    In Her pleasures multiverse, he's evermore Her generous guest.

     

    Elegant prose.

    • 18 posts
    September 17, 2020 12:12 PM PDT


    Harder than diamonds, he was so set in his way.
    "Nobody on Earth can change me", this often he did say.
    With sincere compliments and frankness, did She soothe him.
    Doing some of his favorite things together, oh! this smoothed him.
    Long afore he knew of it, swooned and danced he to Her Siren song, witching wiles, and sway.

     

  • September 19, 2020 10:40 AM PDT

    There was a young woman from France,
    Who every 'Tist wanted to trance
    The tables she turned
    and each 'Tist yearned
    to drop deep at Her glance!

    • 86 posts
    September 19, 2020 1:21 PM PDT

    Love the romantic condition of Jarod's, and the "turning-the-tables-with-her-glance" feel of Hypnosis Enthusiast's.

    Great work, guys. Loving how strong these are still going.

  • September 21, 2020 12:06 PM PDT

    Thanks me-chan!

    A hypnotist lady from Chicago
    was bored during quarantine embargo
    She went up online
    and some subs did entwine
    with Her words and her voice that's like wine!

    • 18 posts
    September 21, 2020 8:33 PM PDT


    So there came to pass some much ballyhooed elections.
    And from some quarters, murmurs of planned insurrections.

    Mused each Hypnodomme who is truly great.
    I will not indulge in trifling, petty hate.

    Worthy subs I'll charm, turn, and train per My directions.

     

  • September 22, 2020 9:08 AM PDT

    A HypnoDomme who's most mesmeric
    once tranced a poor guy name of Merrick
    with his mind in Her thrall
    She locked up his balls
    Now to lift up his stones takes a derrick!

    • 86 posts
    September 22, 2020 1:54 PM PDT

    The beautiful stranger proposed a bet.

    "To win, tell me how many holes comprise a net."

    Eyes naturally fell south toward smooth legs in fishnet pantyhose.

    Numbered holes rose while surroundings and thoughts fell like dominoes.

    Wrapped in her net, in spoken bliss, we somehow both won without regret.

  • September 22, 2020 10:24 PM PDT

    A Woman decked out in high fashion.
    Determined her man needed lashin,'
    while tied to her bed, she crawled in his head,
    and in unfulfilled lust left him thrashin'

  • September 30, 2020 11:07 PM PDT

    A hypnoslave once fell into trance
    for a Hypnodomme's erotic glance
    his mind went all blank
    as she emptied his bank
    and flew off to unwind in France

    • 86 posts
    October 1, 2020 12:32 PM PDT
    hypnosis enthusiast said:

    A hypnoslave once fell into trance
    for a Hypnodomme's erotic glance
    his mind went all blank
    as she emptied his bank
    and flew off to unwind in France

     

    hypnosis enthusiast said:

    A Woman decked out in high fashion.
    Determined her man needed lashin,'
    while tied to her bed, she crawled in his head,
    and in unfulfilled lust left him thrashin'

     

    I really don't envy these men, yet given your writing, I am a little jealous of them. Good stuff.

  • October 3, 2020 8:37 PM PDT

    Thanks!  What surprises me about this is that I have never written limericks before and I'm surprised at how easily they seem to flow for me.  Weird, but in a fun way.