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    June 19, 2018 10:29 PM PDT

    How about a sleepy-time story or two?  Post 'em if you got 'em or share your favorite!

    Just Close Your Eyes

    ...and imagine a luxurious beach with waves lapping at the fine, white sand. The sun is slowly moving down... down, gently caressing the water with its rays, causing a incredible rainbow of color... see them.... red, yellow, rust, and orange... all mixing with the peaceful blue ocean and the darkening dusky sky.

    A silent man sits on the beach, watching the ending of another day as a gentle breeze blows musses his hair like a lover’s stroke. He sits with his knees up, arms hugging his legs... seemingly lost in thought. A large blanket covers the sand, still warm from the sun. The sand feels good on his toes and he glances up the beach a ways ... a solitary figure is walking slowly toward him. The sunlight is fading causing him to squint, trying to make out who it could be. The beach is virtually deserted.... abandoned and private.

    The only sound is of the waves crashing against the shore and the occasional seagull. The figure moves closer and he can make out it is a woman—strong legs and long auburn hair. A slow smile forms on his lips... he knows this person, knows that walk, that smile.

    I approach you... swinging a basket filled with goodies... a sly smile on my face.. the breeze blowing my hair around me... the last of the sun’s rays highlighting my hair, my skin, my eyes... full of mischief. You smile and say my name... knowing I have found you... and that I must have something in mind... with that look on my face. I walk up to you, not saying a word... and move to your back... sitting on my knees. You turn to say something, but I put my finger on your lips... and slowly shake my head... a softly saying “Shhhhhhh, not now... relax.... this is my present for you.... Now, close your eyes..”

    You turn head toward the ocean again... curiosity getting the best of you, yet knowing it will be worth the wait. I open the basket and pull out some oil to massage your back... allowing my fingers to softly caress your shoulder, causing you to relax ever so slightly as I move forward and whisper in your ear...

    ;“Relax.... just close your eyes and let it happen... ”

    My voice is low, and sweet, like honey... and you find yourself doing as I say... without a thought. I pour the sweet oil into my hand, and begin working it into your shoulders... moving my hands in slow circles... feeling you relax more and more under my touch. I spread my fingers and let them begin to work the muscles... getting all the stress and tension out.... my fingers working deeper and deeper.

    All the while, I am whispering to you. “Relax... yes, it feels so good to relax. Just relax. Let your muscles loosen. That’s right. Relax. It feels so good to relax.”

    The sun has painted the sea a with a multitude of color as my hands move further down your back... moving down your spine, and outward... long, sensual strokes.... Your eyes have closed... as with every movement of my hands on you, now, you lean against me. Relaxing so deeply that you move slowly, rhythmically with each stroke. I continue to whisper to you and softly begin to nibble on your shoulder... my tongue moving in sensual circles across your skin, my teeth so very gently biting your neck. You catch your breath... as my warm, soft lips move up your neck, my hands and fingers moving lower... along your lower back... moving out from your spine, easing the tension. You can feel my firm, full breasts against your back... my nipples teasing you with their hardness.

    As my hands move lower, I pull you against me... my hands moving around you... moving up your body... to feel your nipples hardening with my touch. My lips move to your ear, and I whisper... “Let’s take off these clothes... you’re so calmed, relaxed and feeling so wonderful, you really don’t want them on right now... you don’t need them... you want to be free of them.” You move only slightly, whispering in response, “yes.” As you remove your clothing I can feel the passion inside myself stir. I lean forward to play with your nipples with my tongue, circling them slowly.. then faster and finally nibbling on each one, in turn. Your soft moans are all I need to hear and I know you are not only ready, but willing to follow my lead... wherever I have decided to take you.

    I move to lie you down on the blanket... looking into your wondrous blue eyes... and smile... my fingers lightly tracing a path down your body... down your stomach... down slowly to your hips... letting my nails run over your smooth skin... causing you to gasp... and close your eyes again... going with the sensations.

    I spread your legs with one of my hands, and move between them... as I whisper to you again, “My love... your body was meant for me. Your skin for me. Your mind for me. Your sex for me.”

    As you wriggle a bit and softly breathe, “yes... yes... yes.” ... forgetting where you are, lost in the feeling as my fingers move over you and around you, playing with you and teasing you.

    We are now in darkness... only the light from a few stars and the awakening moon. You can see the moonlight in my eyes, and see my desire, my need to have you. My hands over your body as I continue to whisper how your body is no longer yours ....

    “Your skin, your breath, your eyes..... the blood that courses through your veins are not yours.... the more I get inside of you, the more you belong to me.... owning you, deep inside of you... every bit of you.”

    I’ve your left nipple in my mouth as you’ve completely surrendered to my will and have allowed me complete control over your mind and your body. You’ve laid back on the blanket and are aware of nothing else but me. My tongue running over it, my teeth playfully biting it... making you jerk. ...Moving my tongue around and around... taking the erect nipple between my thumb and forefinger, and rolling it back and forth... I feel you spreading your legs as I press against you... feeling your hardness and heat. I move my mouth to the other nipple... teasing it, biting it.... making you shiver in delight. My hand slides down your side, stroking your hip, moving inside your thigh... as I suck and bite at your nipple... and with slow movements, I gently slide a finger to your mouth... your lips so smooth... and inside your mouth so very wet.

    As I move my body beside yours, now, whispering to you... “you belong to me... you are mine... mind, body and soul are mine....” My finger is enjoying making love to your mouth as it draws rhythmically in and out, wet and warm... in and out... in and out.

    Your entire body begins to move to the rhythmic motion... as I know what you’re thinking... what you’re longing for, what you need.... “you belong to me... you are mine.... mind, body, soul and spirit... you are mine... mind, body, soul and spirit.... you are mine... mind, body soul and spirit.....” Faster and faster as your hips move and your muscles tense....

    “you are mine... mind, body, soul and spirit.... you are mine... mind, body soul and spirit.... you are mine..... mind, body soul and spirit....” I can feel how tense your body has become as the need to release becomes urgent. I have taken you to a place so deep inside of your mind that the movement of my finger in your mouth has you so close to orgasm that you have reached the point of no return...

    In and out, faster my finger moves over your lips and in your mouth... in and out... over and over... “you are mine.... mind, body, soul and spirit.... you are mine..... mind, body, soul and spirit.... you are mine.... mind, body soul and spirit...... you are mine... body, soul and spirit.....” Moaning in exasperation, frustration with so much mental and physical tension inside of you, I decide that you have done so well for me and have not only accepted but have turned over complete control to me... I give the command that you may release.... “you may let go... let it all go... release it all and let it happen.... now!” And I smile in the moonlight as I watch wave upon wave of sensation move through you and over you, spilling over and overwhelming you to the rhythmic sound of the waves lapping against the shore...

    © Inamorata
    • 86 posts
    June 23, 2018 12:56 PM PDT

    Before I can come up with anything, just want to say I enjoyed what you shared Lady Inamorata. A very visual and compelling journey in your writing. Not sure if what I could come up with for this thread, but I hope it's as realized as yours.

  • June 27, 2018 9:46 AM PDT

    I suppose I can share this one around here again.




    Oh, hello there. Do you like hypnosis and mind control? Silly question, I’m sure, because, if you didn’t, you probably wouldn’t be sitting there, reading these lines. Sorry, I’m a little nervous. It’s the first time I’m doing this for real and only because of a challenge, you know? My sorority put me up to it, and I really don’t want to let the girls down so do you mind working with me? I’ll make it worth your while, I promise.

    Thank you, you’re so sweet! I’m Beryl, by the way. You don’t have to tell me your name, that’s okay, but I want you to know mine as a sign of trust, okay? Trust is very important because what I’m about to ask you depends on it.

    So… here’s the deal: I’ve always liked to pretend I’m good at hypnotizing people, but the truth is I don’t really have a clue how any of this works if it works at all. I mean, it’s good for parlor tricks and all, a little diversion from the usual fare, but hardly something with actual weight to it, if you know what I mean. You must have read countless fantastic descriptions on this website by now so I’m sure you understand my drift. With your permission, I’d like to pretend I’m going to hypnotize you right now, and I’d like you to pretend to go under for me. We’re being watched, you know? Yes, some of the girls are watching us through a telescope as we speak. Thank God, they didn’t insist on a wire as well because I certainly wouldn’t want one of those things next to my ears or near my breasts or pu…

    Oops, sorry about that! It’s the nerves, I keep telling you. I’m so green at this, and you’re so nice to be reading and listening to my monologue. I’m truly lucky to have found someone like you and, since you’ve just given me your word you’ll help, I can relax a bit, knowing things will work out in the end. Yes, things will work out, rewards will be given and everyone will be quite pleased when all is said and done.

    So, how are we going to do this? I’m just going to make up something on the spot. Improvisation is good because it fires up imagination, and imagination is believed to be a huge part of all of this. I’ll need something specific for you to focus on, hmmm, let’s see…

    I know, I just said I’m green so let’s run with it. Would you like a green pendant swinging from side to side? Green contact lenses imbued with a captivating glare, pinning you on the spot? Flashing lights seem to work for some people too. It doesn’t really matter what it is, as long as it’s green and strikes your fancy, so imagine something green you really like and hold it in your mind’s eye for as long as you can. Try to visualize only that thing, as if that thing is, in fact, the only thing that exists in the whole world. Obviously, you can’t focus on anything else because of it, but that’s okay. When you’re so focused on the green before you, trying to break eye contact is hard, and rather pointless. Green is the color of hope, and I hope you’re enjoying the feeling you’re experiencing right now because it can only get better. Deeper focus, deeper satisfaction. Deeper satisfaction, deeper focus. A circle of green and you’re in the center of it.

    Keep focusing on the green and take it one step further. Inside the circle, imagine a luxurious grassy field. A soft breeze caresses your cheeks. There is another circle in front of you, one made of blooming trees, where the green is even deeper. The air is fresher inside it and it’s as if you’re inhaling green into your lungs as well. You reach for that new circle, deeper and deeper, as it slowly begins to close down on you.

    Yes, the circle is compressing, getting narrower, but there’s just enough space inside for you, your body, and your mind. The green touches your heart, and every fiber of your being, deepening the focus and the pleasure that comes from it. It’s growing from inside out, enveloping you.

    You finally stop moving and find your feet firmly planted on the ground, another tree in the circle. Green tendrils stretch out from the earth to bind your wrists and you welcome them peacefully, content. You see nothing but green, feel nothing but green… my words are whispers of green that render you helpless and, as your addiction to this wonderful sensation grows tenfold, the circle closes completely, and green is all you are, a speck, a leaf, a pod, a thing of beauty yet meaningless unless I say otherwise. I gave you the green, I created it for you. You’ve been created by me, to flourish and serve, to do as I say. You will do as I say, won’t you?

    Good. Thank you. Thank you for listening and accepting the truth. Creatures created serve their creator, the grass is always greener on the other side of the mind. I suppose I should apologize for tricking you, but I won’t. You weren’t really tricked. You kept reading and listening because you wanted to so the only thing I did was give you the story you wanted, and an ending that suited us both. My friends are going to be green with envy when they see the end result! Now, come along, my little green pea, it’s time to plant some new things inside your eager mind…